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if I were a crayon
I would be red
scarlett bright
deep ruby or
fine wine
inflamed at
twilight time

laughing
moving swiftly
over the pages
adding depth
mysteries
intrigue

how could I
be anything
but red
demanding attention

a small
black ball
dances
across my spaces
eager gamblers
yell
come on red
secrets

flitting through roses
shading or tinting myself
for maroon and pink
touching
stargazer lilies
tinged with a streak
of deep blood red
that brings
the fragrance
of life

yes,
if I were a crayon
I would be
red
I am Victoria Tarrani, by the way.
Please critique. This is a very rough draft and it needs work.
{beg} {sigh}
Tori
There are some superb poems here. I hope you post them where I can comment for you.

Thanks.

Monsters: 15
3 UFO Turtle
3 Ultimate Baseball Kid
3 Solar Flare Dragon
3 Raging Flame Sprite
2 Magna Drago
1 Sangan

Spells: 12
3 Shrink
1 Level Limit - Area B
2 Hammer Shot
1 Swords of Revealing Light
1 Heavy Storm
1 MST
1 Smashing Ground
1 Reasoning
1 Monster Reborn

Traps: 13
3 Reckless Greed
2 Bottomless Trap Hole
3 Threatening Roar
1 Gravity Bind
1 Torrential Tribute
1 Magic Cylinder
1 Ultimate Offering
1 The Transmigration Prophecy

Extra Deck: 15
3 Stardust Dragon
2 Red Dragon Archfiend
2 Thought Ruler Archfiend
1 Goyo Guardian
2 Iron Chain Dragon
2 Colossal Fighter
2 Magical Android
1 Black Rose Dragon

I have thought about this on and off for about 6 months now and the only answer i can come up with is an oil fire in the ocean. However i think this is to sensible for a riddle. Good luck to anyone who tries to answer!

As she spoke
I nearly had a stroke
Cupid hit me
She asked if I was busy
Honestly no,
Are you having a good day? was my reply
Its not too bad
Her soft voice sang back to me
Sound of beauty
My head went dizzy

There’s tea and coffee in the waiting room
She came out with a cup for me
Forgot the sugar
Still tasted sweet
With the first sup
All my doom and gloom was gone

Her phone buzzed
She said hi with a smile
My heart raced at one hundred miles
Her teeth were like pearls
Her smile revealed

I put the wheels back on the car
Knowing she would drive away on them
The day went dim
So I closed my eyes and imagined what could have been

Thanks for opinions or advice or just reading...PEACE

2-black or blue?

3-tea or coffee?

4-winter or summer?

5-love or lust?

6-beauty or money?

enjoyed?

star???